SSR

Title: dreamland

Author: Sarah Dessen

Assignment:

The point of view in this story really creates the mood. I think if it was told by a different person in the story it could be a very depressing diary or a person talking about a disappointment. The story is told by Caitlin the main character, and she doesn’t really seem to care that her sister is missing. This story is fine as it is, so far. I think if the point of view was to b changed that it should be a narrator telling the story in 3^rd person omniscient. This way it is not focusing in on just one person. It will make the book more interesting to me. That is about the only thing I would ask for about the point of view.